From: "Akihikio" Okay, so I havn't posted a Fanfiction in a LONG time, but I started to write this one, and I really love it so far. I have ideas for it (as a simi-yaoi) though my ideas are somewhat OOC... :( And In some cases VERY ooc... though not very often... This is what I have so far, but I would like coments on it. ********************************************************************* Kaoru looked solemnly out her bedroom window. It was a rainy day, and she wasn’t much a person for rainy days. She sighed deeply at the rain and thought of Kenshin making breakfast for the dojo. She got up unwillingly, and put on her blue kimono. She liked this one particularly well, being as it was the one Kenshin had recently bought her. She had one Sano had won gambling, her second favorite. Even though it was MUCH more expensive than the one Kenshin had bought her with some money he had earned for doing chores at a local home. Kenshin’s meant much more. The kimono Kenshin had bought her, had cherry blossom flowers along the neck. He had done it himself, a trait she didn’t know he had. It was tastefully done in a white thread that seemed to go perfectly with the deep purple that was the kimono’s main color. The sleeves were embroidered (which Kenshin had also done) with the same white flowers, as was the bottom of the kimono. She tied the obi. This obi had come plain white, and Kenshin embroidered it with the flowers, though in purple. The obi was tied with a purple “rope”. She knew Kenshin was talented, but this kimono was well embroidered. He must have worked on it for months. She unfortunately did not have a hair ribbon to match, but to her it didn’t matter. She just wore her favorite blue ribbon, it was more special due to the blood Kenshin had stained on it. She had got most of the blood out. She could smell the rice as she entered the kitchen. She could also smell the fish Kenshin had caught that morning. He was going to make rice balls. Kenshin made wonderful rice balls. She stared at him for a moment threw the kitchen door. His hair was down this morning, an unusual thing, but she took it in none the less. “Kaoru-dono, Daijoubu ka?” he asked turning around concerned. “Oi Kenshin. I’m alright.” She blushed deeply “I was just curious as to why your hair was down.” “Some one stole my hair tie De gozare yo!” “Well, I think your hair is beautiful.” Kaoru covered her mouth. “I mean-” “Doomo Arigatou Kaoru-dono.” he smiled “I know what you meant.” They stood there and just met eyes for a moment. “Kenshin...” ***************************************************************** Arigatou! PLEASE send me C&C good or bad. I want to know what I'm doing right/wrong... Any C&C is welcome, I take it VERY well. :) Akihikio AKA: Hyde No Aijin, Sanosuke No Kobito, Hyde No Chuushin --------------------------- ONElist Sponsor ---------------------------- Campaign 2000 is here! http://www.onelist.com Discuss your thoughts; get informed at ONElist. See our homepage. ------------------------------------------------------------------------