From: Ayame33@aol.com Minna, Hi! Im no longer gonna be a lurker, even if it is gonna be for only a few posts. ^.~ The following is a result of night school and too much late night coffee drinking @.@X It's a songfic of course, as the header implies. The main characters that are in it are Kaoru Siatou ((dont kill me if i mispell his name onegai! ^.^X;;;;)) and of course, Kenshin. Please pardon the roughness of it, as it is a rough draft and i wanted all of your help to make it better. After all it IS the first fic-type thing i have ever finished and shown to anyone.. @.@X If you al like this one enough.. i may do one on another of Alanis' songs, which should be Misao and Aoshi.... anyhoo.. heres hoping, enjoy...((if its at all possible!)) *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Hand In My Pocket SongFic Song By: Alanis ~opening music plays~ (a stil picture of Kaoru, then Siatou, then Kenshin appears during this time) Im broke but im happy im poor but im kind Im short but im healthy yeah (Scene light up, Koru is standing at a vending stand, counting out money in her palm to pay for some bread. She feels something tugging on her kimono, so she looks down, a little girl is standing there, smiling weakly at her. Kaoru pays for the bread, and hands some to the girl and smiles as the girl's face lights up with joy) Im high but im grounded Im sane but im overwhelmed Im lost but im hopeful baby (Scene changes, kaoru is watching as kenshin leaves the dojo to return to being a rurouni. She holds back her tears and runs inside and looks at the celing, praying theres a way she can see him again. Scene fades.) What it all comes down to Is that everythings gonna be fine fine fine (We see Kenshin and Yahiko "practicing" in the dojo yard from Kaorus Point of view. she smiles and walks up to them when they stop) Ive got one hand in my pocket And the other one is giving a high five. (Kenshin turns and smiles at her, and yahiko takes advantages of the situation and knocks kenshin down with his wooden sword. Kaoru. Kenshin and Yahiko laugh, and the scene fades completly.) I feel drunk but Im sober Im young and underpaid (The scene brightens to show siatou in a semi-dark room in an over stuffed chair playing with a shot glass. He smirks slightly, then stands, scene fades) Im tired but im working I care but im restless (Scene changes. Siatou is attempting to preform his gatsou on shishio, he falls, from apparent wounds. he gets up to try again, scene fades) Im here but Im really gone In wrong and Im sorry baby (A new scene appears, siatou is pulling on his gloves, when he finishes he slips a pack of cigs. into his pocket. His wife stands by waiting to tell him goodbye for the day) What it all comes down to Is that everythings Quite allright (he turns, and looks at her, emotions swirling in his eyes he would never express outwardly) Ive got one hand in my pocket and the other one's flickin a cgiarette (he leaves, and once out the dore, he gets out a cig, and lights it, putting it to his lips) Ive got one hand in my pocket (siatou, at a side angle, taking a drg form his ciggarette) and the other one is is giving a peace sign (kaoru, leaning against the door frame of her dodjo, smiling) Im free but im focused (sideshot of Keshin. Ke looks up from the ground outside, the sun starting to set) Im green but im wise (he stand, and watches the sun set, hair blowing slighty in the wind) Im hard but im friendly baby (a flash of his hitikiri past shows, then his smiling face) Im sad but im laughing Im brave but im chicken shit (Kenshin, walking home, stops, thinking he saw tomoe. He smiles, as a tear glances down his cheek) Im sick but im pretty baby (his hand goes up to his cheek tracing the cross scar lightly, then composes himself) What it all comes down to (he walks onto the dojo's property and sits on a rock near the pond) Is that no ones really got it figured out just yet (he looks down at his reflection in the pond, then glances to the sky, smiling) Ive got one hand in my pocket and the other ones playin the piano (he sighs, and relaxes against the rock, finally feeling at home) what it all comes down to my friends (still pictures of Kaoru, Siatou, and Kenshin, alternating) Is that everythigns just fine fine fine (A scene of kaoru kenshin yahiko sano and megumi staning out side the dojo, seeming to be posing for a picture) Ive got one hand in my pocket (Siatou walks up and poses with the group) and the others hailing a taxi cab (they hold the pose for a second, then siatou whispers something to sano that riles him up and he attempts to throttle him) ~closing music~ (Kenshin glances over and sweatdrops, then hoping to see some sanity, looks to kaoru and yahiko.. who are also at it. Megumi has dissapeared inside seeing her skills will be needed soon, leaving a bewildered kenshin to settle the fights) ~*~yawari~*~ ~*~ -(~*~)- Disclamer: Rurouni Kenshin is not mone, and neither is the song "hand it my pocket. They belong to their respective owners Pleae dont sue me, Im only 16 and allready in debt!... oro @.@ -(~*~)- Hope you enjoyed minna!! ~ayame~ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Looking for a new hobby? Want to make a new friend? http://www.onelist.com Come join one of 170,000 e-mail communities at ONElist!